so 2 questions

1. i had a 1-94, but my parents lost it. i do however, still have the visa that was on my old passport. i did write on the application that i had the i-94 and lost it though, will it be a big problem?

2. for the i-765ws, i'm typing up the "additional information" part and am explaining why i NEED the work permit since i'm a college student and NEED to work legitimately especially because of the tuitions and i wanna work and serve my community, yada yada... but i feel like it's sounding a bit "cheesy". would that be bad? should i re-write it??