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Originally Posted by AJinCT
This is great idea. I think we should change two things tho...
Instead of saying that most dreamers don't agree with them, I think we should make it clear that the protesters don't represent Dreamers and we don't condone their tactics:
We strongly condemn these tacticts and they do not represent the Dreamer movement.
I don't think it's smart to label anyone as enemies when we are trying to garner support. It will look better if we remove it:
We strongly encourage other dreamer groups to be respectful of our allies and our enemies.
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Thank you for the suggestions. I will definitely edit the letter when I get home. Please keep the edits and suggestions coming.
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