My i-765WS explanation.

Usually I'm alright with these things, but one can not be too sure since we only get one shot.

Anyone mind reading this and letting me know if it sounds good or if it should be altered to a different tone/message/etc?

Thank you.


"The above total for "current annual income" reflects income from freelance projects.

The above total for "current annual expenses" reflects bills such as utilities, phone, Internet, computer payments, donations. Food, clothing, bus transportation fares and miscellaneous expenses are also included in aforementioned total.

My current unlawful status does not allow me to legally obtain full-time employment to help contribute to those who I am a financial burden to, thus it is a great necessity that I obtain work authorization so that I may finally contribute to the society I wish to be part of."

It looks very good, actually. Good luck!

Thanks! Here's to hoping it's good enough for them.

Sounds great! Short, sweet, and to the point!
I added a little bit more about myself, like what I planned to do if I were granted the ability to work legally. But I do like your explanation as well!