Check my essay?

Hi guys and girls!

I'm doing an essay and wanted to see if anyone wants to proof read it, and edit it.

You can download my essay here: http://my15party.squarespace.com/storage/Essay%201.doc

when is it due? if i have time tomorrow ill help u out

let me start by saying it's pretty good.....kinda short for an essay (research paper) my research papers usually are 10 + pages but i don't know what ur teacher wants u forgot to title ur work cited page : Works Cited and underline it second u forgot to number ur works cited and third there is very lil cited works one person.....that is a problem.....since u are putting all ur ethos on that person .... i believe u need more than one....other than that its pretty good u should get the book rules or writes it helps u out with ur easy's well other than that yea its good....

I don't know why a lot of people tend to bold or underline their titles (ex. essays), just don't do it. You only underline when it comes to TITLE of books, magazines, newspapers, etc. In order words, don't underline "Works Cited."

u could there nothin wrong with underling it "work cited" but his right ur better off not doing it i just check my recent essay and i didn't do it lol yea .....thanks for the correction......

it's not a research paper. LOL It's just a regular essay!