A song I made for us dreamers!

Let me know what you think. Enjoy!

Wake me up by Rocasalada

I had hoped that one near day
you would understand my pain
then you'd see that it’s OK
to see me as your friend.

I have come from very far
from a place I don't remember
but I've learned to love and tender
the United States.

And from school and from my sports
I have medals that I won
and from all the rot-see officers
I was bearer of the flag.

And I pray to god above us
That you understand

That I'm here once again
at the brink of being all
I can be, and you can,
make my dreams real come on.
let me really demonstrate
the potential that I got
I don’t want go on dreaming
In this very real world.

It is really hard to find
Incompleteness in your life
when rejection comes from those
that you need help from.

It’s why I dream like Mr. King
For your real comprehension
that you come to see that I'm
also part of this great nation.

And I pray to god above us
that you understand

That I’m here once again
at the brink of being all
I can be, and you can,
make my dreams real come on.
let me really demonstrate
the potential that I got
I don’t want go on dreaming
In this very real world.

Cause I'm here once again
and like me there's a vast
population that has been
dreaming just like in the past
Mr King had dreamed for us
wanting civil rights for all
and today is the tomorrow
of the days he walked on earth.

today is the tomorrow
of the days he walked on earth.

Link to the Song
http://www.myspace.com/Dreamrocamusic

Seriously? 1 star? You really couldn't give me a little more constructive criticism than that?

Alright, if I get 5 consecutive posts from members that are not trolls that think this will hurt the DA, I will consider taking down the lyrics and the song from myspace. But I'm open to all sort of criticism as long as it is longer than getting 1 star that means "terrible" on post ratings. So please say what you got to say.

And to the 4 people that rated this post with one star u mind posting who you are?

Thank you.

I think is pretty good!

Dude...I don't have words for this.

Dude don't have time to read music right now or to contemplate on it. Right now Dream act calls are in my head. Call!!! then we can sign after dream is passed..

i cant get jiggy to that shit

Don't quit your day job...

Thanks for taking your time to make this! I like it but it would be more catchy & seem less endless if you shortened the "hook" . give it a pop feel. I like it so far though! good job

"And I pray to god above us
That you understand

That I'm here once again
at the brink of being all
I can be, and you can,
make my dreams real come on.
let me really demonstrate
the potential that I got
I don’t want go on dreaming
In this very real world."



p.s.
Haters are gonna hate, just tweak it a bit & it'll be a lot better.

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